Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As environmental pollution has recently become a controversial issue these days, it is often argued that either the government or people should assume the responsibility to preserve the environment. While I believe that there should be no exception as an environmental caretaker, I will review both points of view in detail.
On the one hand, the government can be the only appropriate organization to act and to respond promptly to various environmental issues. Consider there is extreme air pollution by emitting a whole host of toxic gases from the industry. Without restriction and legislation governing by the authority, ordinary people have no measure to stop such air pollution. Moreover, only the government can introduce and execute a variety type of punishments, ranging from a small fine to community service, or even perhaps prison sentences to those who break the environmental protection law.
On the other hand, we, as an individual, should not completely rely on the government to solve every single environmental issue. Instead of that, we ourselves should find a way to contribute to the protection of mother nature. For example, actions like recycling the garbage into the proper bins or having a shower with less use of shampoo could be done only by the efforts of individuals. On top of that, as the government is elected by our votes, we should care about every action of the government toward environmental problems instead of shifting the responsibilities to the authority.
In conclusion, in order to live in a clean, pollution-free environment and leave it to the next generation, both the government and the individual should be aware and make an effort to contribute the preserving the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24460431655 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24576061324 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.530845053 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151201434692 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546054633452 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468920222341 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916738061673 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341040482164 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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