The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?
It is getting harder to find a source of drinkable water these days. While there are many theories to explain this phenomenon, I also think that a range of measures we can take to solve the issue.
To begin with, it is well-known that water is a vital element to maintain the functions of our body properly. In order words, the shortage of drinkable water can bring destructive impacts on our lives or even perhaps the possibility of distinction. To deal with this, many governments and institutions conducted investigations regarding the cause of this unprecedented situation and concluded it is all because of global warming. Global warming causes hotter, less dry weather throughout the world, resulting in extreme drought which dries the source of water like rivers, lakes, and even underwater. For example, while the average temperature was rapidly increased in the past decade, the availability of drinkable water was inversely proportional.
Nonetheless, there are certain actions we can take if global warming is truly the one that is behind the scenes. Firstly, We can simply impose green taxes on the industries, drivers, and airlines that emits a whole host of toxic gases and an enormous amount of carbon dioxide. Secondly, investment in the technology converting salty water to drinkable water could be another solution, meaning we will have a potentially unlimited source of water if this became possible. Lastly, as an individual, we can participate the campaign to reduce daily usage of water.
In conclusion, although we are facing a serious problem of drinkable water shortage by global warming, I guarantee that it can easily be fixed by adopting some measures mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23357664234 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90159527756 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 290.88556701 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3293476189 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275803315081 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951489137248 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466852319969 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163318004643 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244108061123 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 41.2886597938 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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