Many psychological experts unanimously suggest that not engaging in any activities for a long period of time might be the best way to reduce stress. From my point of view, I partly agree with this statement and argue that there is another solution to this problem.
On the one hand, doing nothing for some time is a good way in response to stress. After working for hours on end, people need to take a certain amount of time to wind down and relax, which allows them to completely forget about the work, the stress and to organise ones’ thoughts. If individuals are unable to have time for their relaxation, they run a higher risk of coming down with psychological problems such as anxiety, stress or mental deterioration. Moreover, in the worst case, some people can not manage to deal with their illness, which might eventually lead to committing suicide. Hence, resting for a long time can be a good way to reduce stress.
On the other hand, resting is not the ultimate solution to this issue. It is believed that spending too much time alone and not engaging in any physical activities may result in laziness, which means that people would become unmotivated to do their jobs or finish their work in an unproductive way. In many cases, this solution fails to help people overcome stress but makes the situation worse; for example, some people after doing nothing for a long period of time and spending time alone tend to overthink and get stuck in their own chaotic thoughts because they are unable to share their emotion or talk with friends and family. Therefore, besides not engaging in any activities, people are suggested to go away with their families, or simply go out with their friends and have some little talks in order to forget all the daily tension.
In conclusion, I believe that the best way to deal with stress is to do nothing for a period of time and to try spending a certain amount of it to go on a trip and hang out with who people are close with.
- Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle these days 89
- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 56
- Some psychologists recommended that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time in a day Do you agree or disagree 67
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 76
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t engaging in any activities for a long period of time might be the best way to reduce stress....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unproductive way" with adverb for "unproductive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d to do their jobs or finish their work in an unproductive way. In many cases, this solution fails to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e people after doing nothing for a long period of time and spending time alone tend to overthi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...deal with stress is to do nothing for a period of time and to try spending a certain amount of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62889518414 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44685095274 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492917847025 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.366724563 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229941806405 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977209033026 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789051922821 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150463158786 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314623250668 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.