The pie chart compares the generation of five distinct energy in France from 1995 to 2005.
Overall, it is noteworthy that petro production witnessed a drop while other energy generation experienced rose in 2005. Additionally, the most noticeable feature is that there was a great proportion of energy production using coal in both years 1995 and 2005.
In 1995, coal, gas and petro accounted for roughly one-third each of energy production in France. Over the next ten years, there was a slight rise to 30.93% of coal consumption, followed by 30.31% of gas. In contrast, the energy generation by petro nose-dived, with the figure ending at 19.55%.
Additionally, in 1995, only 6.40% of energy production was composed of nuclear while the remaining 4.90% was other types of energy, which was the lowest. At the end of the period shown, the percentage of nuclear went up to 10.10%. In a similar fashion, a parallel trend can be seen in the figure for other, which doubled that of 1995.
- Some psychologists recommended that to overcome stress in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time in a day Do you agree or disagree 67
- The table blow gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 78
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 76
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ercentage of nuclear went up to 10.10%. In a similar fashion, a parallel trend can be seen in the fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96407185629 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70241053453 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5440223338 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156357045834 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691743971383 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664895010144 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115809023617 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676814001156 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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