Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basic. What is the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking
it is undeniable that people are choosing the other mode of transpotation for commuting rather than walking.There are sevral reasons for them to choose other type of transportaion.In this essay am going to discuss the various reasons and trouble shooting ways to combat this situation.
Firstly, i would like to discuss the reasons why people prefer to choose other way for transportation ratherthan walking.One of the main reason behind this is,modern employees are preferred to opt for the faster way of transportaton,like driving car,using public transportation modes to reach to thier destintion in the less time.Another main reason for the residents to select other ways ,is city people are addicted towards sedetary life,very less residents do not have thier own cars in this era,which does not allow them to walk for their needs.In some countries,household people are not using robots for their household works,rather than doing it manually.this impies that people arejust depending on the machines for the routiene work.
Secondly, we will discuss some of the ways to encourage the people to increase their physical activity.As physical activity such as walking will keep the body fit and healthy,this need to be folled by the people mostly in their daily routiene.Government should implement such tax on the car owners such that they think another way to reach like walking.Another way the govt should conduct such awaring campaigns to make the people understand the importance of walking in their life to be healthy.
In conclusion,i would like to suggest government to consider the remarkeble ways to encourge people such that they could back to their walking habbit,which inturns makes themselve relaxed and replenish.Overall walking progrmmes should be held to aware the people particiption in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51408450704 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25145504791 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.513096362 49.4020404114 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.5 106.682146367 367% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.7667163134 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216976704977 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138441429234 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398149721714 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138441429234 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398149721714 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 50.2224549098 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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