Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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...ve and sophisticated world where we live,humanbeings have been looking for best ways for pro...
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...best ways for proper children nurturing.Many individuals believe,it is an appropriat...
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...ldren nurturing.Many individuals believe,it is an appropriate way to offering schoo...
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...r each grade they get in school. However,some other have an opposite point of view.In...
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...me other have an opposite point of view.In my vantge point it is not proper to off...
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... point it is not proper to offer little students money as present for high marks they ge...
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...esent for high marks they get in school.In what follows,i will elaborate on my van...
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...marks they get in school.In what follows,i will elaborate on my vantage point. ...
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...ft for their good performance at school.To be more specific,little students do not...
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...erformance at school.To be more specific,little students do not have enough knowledge a...
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...ot waste it on buying unnecessary stuff.In addition, they are not mture enough to ...
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...nise good and bad ways of spending money,so offering them money for their high gra...
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... ways of spending money,so offering them money for their high grades in school,pa...
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...m money for their high grades in school,pave a way for them to waste their oney and ...
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...orrect way leading to have consequences.For instance,my father used to give me mone...
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...eading to have consequences.For instance,my father used to give me money for my hig...
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...r my high grades when i was 9 years old.i wasted my money on buying playstations,...
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...i wasted my money on buying playstations,and playing with them entire the week.As a ...
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...s,and playing with them entire the week.As a result ,i could ot concentrate on stu...
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...ng with them entire the week.As a result ,i could ot concentrate on studies, and l...
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...entrate on studies, and lost the grades.If my father had not gave me money as a gi...
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...nd lost the grades.If my father had not gave me money as a gift, i would have passed...
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...father had not gave me money as a gift, i would have passed my other lessons. ...
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...ich deserves some attention here is that,suggesting money as a present for young students,n...
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...ng money as a present for young students,negatively affects students behavior and influence...
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...school age children for thier high marks,makes them less enthusiastic about learning l...
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...r only motivation is money and receiving money causing aberrant behavior not only...
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...his age but also in thier future career.To put it in other words, students should ...
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...ool age children for their high grades. Since, lack of ability to manage the money in...
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...ty to manage the money in children leads to wasting the money. Besides, it will ...
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... manage the money in children leads to wasting the money. Besides, it will ruin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, thus, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21195652174 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03879686544 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527173913043 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 294.189304596 49.4020404114 596% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.0 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5714285714 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.7142857143 7.06120827912 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393831574289 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188839168905 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874954104295 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257547411551 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205606221617 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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