Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Outer space and aliens are always a curious topic for researchers. It is believed by some scientists that there are higher forms of living beings residing on the other planets, and human beings should try to contact them. Whereas a section of the scientist community still reckons this idea as preposterous that might put our own existence in danger. In my opinion, any type of communication with intelligent life forms in the cosmos could be threatening for humans.
People who advocate the establishment of the connection with the aliens suggests that the earth’s natural resources are constantly diminishing with the increasing population. As, a study by California University states that by 2050, all reservoirs of natural gas, crude oil, and especially water would go dry and the earth could become inhabitable. Therefore, before embarking on the doomsday, it is better that scientists can explore space and make contact with celestial beings which could probably help us either in protecting our own planet or migrating to theirs to colonize, if possible.
Although no one can guarantee a fruitful outcome from any interaction with the extraterrestrial life force, thus, some scientists are afraid of such communications. Aliens, out there, could be vastly advanced than us, maybe millions of years. They can have more knowledge and developed technology than the earth’s inhabitants through which they can exploit the human race or may even wipe out human existence, like every superior species always takes advantage of the inferior ones.
In conclusion, some scientist wants to broaden their horizons by exploring outer space for the benefit of humankind. I, however, believe, rather than investing time and money in futile endeavors which could have negative implications, scientists should research for better ways to save planet earth and its resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43686006826 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93597496246 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645051194539 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3052137385 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222187419043 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818241083431 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932988224062 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134404722504 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975702498749 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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