Some sports are extremely dangerous to players. Why do people participate in such sports? Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved.
Although most of the time performing any physical activity or games is considered to be beneficial for health and well being, there exists some sports which are life threatening too. For example: sky diving, mountain climbing, river rafting, etc.
Mostly games which involve high degree of risks are performed by people out of love and passion.However, sometimes people are experimental too and wishes to risk their lives for the sake of being adventurous.The fact that we live life only once and we should do what we desire is fine but taking it for granted is strongly condemned as these games are not child’s play and can cause irreversible damages.
On the contrary, the risks involved in the games like skydiving can be reduced by taking some precautionary measures.So, for the sports which involves jumping of the cliff or from an aircraft, proper harness should be in place, good quality support guards should be given to the person performing it and basic knowledge of the body movement in the air should be taught to the person performing by the authority which organizes such sports facility. In addition to this, if these can be performed along with a trained person the risk can be reduced multifold.
In conclusion, if a person wishes to perform any life-threatening sport then they should take maximum advantages of precautionary measures and minimize the risks involved as life is precious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98319327731 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65893029564 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4655978485 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.777777778 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174380842308 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761592313381 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475062671165 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108138803451 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207244471048 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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