Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done this situation?
With increasing urbanization, many youngsters are migrating to cities for better opportunities, while leaving older population in the countryside. There are few challenges because of this trend, such as no support for the ageing population in their later years and stagnation of economy. This essay will discuss both these issues in detail and suggest few viable solutions to arrest this trend.
Most important factor for developing economy to prosper is to have agriculture as the backbone for growth. Agriculture is primarily an activity that adds employment and consumption to the economy. For example, in countries like India, agriculture contributes to 50% of the country’s GDP. Agriculture is mainly a countryside activity which requires participation of young population. With more youth drifting to cities, the economy will start deteriorating. Next important factor is lack of support for older age group when they are incapable of doing things independently. To support this view, countryside doesn’t have easy access to medical facilities. In case of emergencies, younger population acts as support to help them commute or disburse assistance. Without this youth, old people will be helpless during the time of need.
To manage the above issues, one should add more lucrative employment opportunities in countryside. For instance, a factory that is technologically sound and offers adequate payout to young population so they are reluctant to travel to city side for jobs. Another solution could be increasing government investments that would encourage building good schools and hospitals, so that young generation can have a better quality of life even in countryside.
To conclude, while it is difficult to stop youth from switching to cities, it is important to protect the economic growth and support the ageing people by offering more advanced facilities and opportunities that would force them to re-consider their decision on leaving their hometowns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58609271523 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15118551925 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9161704373 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172400875724 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523128372859 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543232074446 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989241833279 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294027278533 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.