In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
Large popularity of people experienced food shortage despite the advancement of agricultural sector. In this essay, not only causes but also solutions associated with issue will be outlined.
There are several reasons why people still hungry though there’s technological advancement. First of all, the problem of overpopulation around the world become more substantial overtime which give a rise in higher demand for edible materials. As a result, there’s more chance that the number of hunger is increasing despite the agricultural advancement. Another point to consider is economic centralisation. Since the development appeared to occur in major cities around the world, it’s almost certain that individuals in the less developed nations still encountered with insufficient amount of resources. Take, countries in south africa,for example.
Nevertheless, there are a myriad of methods addressing the issues. For one thing, the problem is in world-scale, therefore, it’s essential for governments around the world to help alleviate the problem together not only gathering ideas but also sharing resources among one another. Moreover, another development to consider is in educational system. Knowledge is the key to elevate people's standard of living owing to the fact that they will have more employment opportunities and adequate amount of money to purchase food
In conclusion, even though there are several causes regarding food deficit. Were governments around the world help mitigate the issues altogether, I believe that the problem will gradually be mitigated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...sources. Take, countries in south africa,for example. Nevertheless, there are a my...
^^^^
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...or example. Nevertheless, there are a myriad of methods addressing the issues. For o...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dequate amount of money to purchase food In conclusion, even though there are se...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82478632479 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12100427577 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8936801794 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165908745674 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504421073675 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438340359017 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945325526901 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183533367968 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.18 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.