Stress is the main issue in the modern Society. Discuss the main factors causing stress in the modern Society.
We are living in an Environment, where money is attracting people rather than relationships. Money is indeed the main cause of stress. There are many factors which is causing stress to take a hike in modern society. Below are the major factors which causes stress. Giving more preference to wealth than Health: Nowadays, people are lethargic. They do believe in earning but try to find an immediate resource get credits in their account. They do not believe in hard-earned Money. They end up causing issues to their health, which in turn helps to grow stress and eventually make them pessimist. Isn't it a big issue in our society? People are even taught to create such an impression on the society which tend to suppress poor. Another factor which cause stress is "Prestige". In our society people always pay attention towards their honor. "Prestige" plays a vital role in one's life. Prestige is the main reason behind selfishness. One who is selfish, will always be alone. This will lead to an increase in the amount of stress one bears. For example, an individual who runs a business, considering himself the sole owner and care-taker of it will always end up getting less opportunities. Less opportunities will lead to less productivity. Less productivity will not help him to grow his business. Eventually, he will stuck at a position where he will tend to lose everything that he earned. Even, he may not be respected by the workers who works for him, as he may not be appreciating them for their work. At the end, He/She may suffer from Stress. Hard work, though less wage rate is also one of the reasons behind stress. People work to fulfill their fundamental needs, which is Food, Shelter, Cloth. If they will need to opt between any of these three, they are not earning well, or they are getting paid appropriately. Stress today is the main reason for many suicide attempts taken place in last few decades. One shouldn't be paying attention on things which may cause stress to him. And there should be proper Govt policies should be taken place or laws should be improved as per human welfare. As a human being I will take an attempt to approach our beloved, Prime Minister to take an action which would help in favor of Human Welfare. There should be changes in the behavior of human being towards each other, this will not only help in reducing the stress in our daily schedule but also help our society to become a better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ey do not believe in hard-earned Money. They end up causing issues to their health, ...
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Line 1, column 596, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...ess and eventually make them pessimist. Isnt it a big issue in our society? People a...
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Line 1, column 894, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...os;Prestige' plays a vital role in ones life. Prestige is the main reason behin...
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Line 1, column 1191, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...-taker of it will always end up getting less opportunities. Less opportunities will ...
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Line 1, column 1211, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
...ways end up getting less opportunities. Less opportunities will lead to less product...
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Line 1, column 1340, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
... grow his business. Eventually, he will stuck at a position where he will tend to los...
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Line 1, column 1941, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ts taken place in last few decades. One shouldnt be paying attention on things which may...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75581395349 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70114952594 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525581395349 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0784132489 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36666666667 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205412586199 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672941012385 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106856134471 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205412586199 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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