Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, many people increasingly suffering from stress-related sicknesses. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress-related illnesses including working on late nights and worrying about something. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including managing work time and changing the mind into some hobbies.
Many people working on late nights due to job pressure. Some people are worried about problems that they are facing due to family-related issues. People place themselves under pressure to complete the work daily. Besides, they do not know to handle family problems. For example, software engineers need to complete and deploy the particular task on that day itself. Moreover, these people are worrying that they can’t spend time with their family because of work pressure. This often results in suffering from sicknesses because they are working on long late nights and not able to balance work and family life.
People should learn to know that how to manage work-time and try to involve their mind in several hobbies to mitigating stress-related problems. People need to realize that they are not only born to work but also to enjoy life. Furthermore, they should know managing work-life balance and occupy themselves into recreation events such as family time, exercise, yoga, swimming, etc. Recent research found that people, who travel, spend time with their family, and doing physical activities have overcome the burnout state. Therefore, to reduce work time pressure and unusual sorrows, one must include a better ratio of work and rest.
In conclusion, in todays’ fast-moving world more and more people are becoming ill as a result of stress. This essay discussed how stress is caused by working on late nights and unnecessary worries. This essay also suggested that the solutions to these problems are twofold: to manage work time and to involve the mind in refreshment actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3606557377 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62008860228 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52131147541 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9641369616 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127859549103 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494926011683 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493419534203 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108410776474 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743230492415 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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