Studying abroad has more benefits than studying in your country

Grammar and spelling errors:
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In modern times, this issue of studying ...
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...ument and provide my overall opinion. In one hand, there are two main reasons ...
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... mate there and married her. Now he has job stabled there. Moreover, studying abroa...
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...oad Increases persons life experiences. On the other hand, many people believe t...
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...et a job early after your graduation. In conclusion, this issue of studying ab...
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...ly different with that you live before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0480349345 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47693349882 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519650655022 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.9636878221 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.688892107752 0.244688304435 282% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250770975271 0.084324248473 297% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.248134418633 0.0667982634062 371% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.461162632542 0.151304729494 305% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178471939699 0.056905535591 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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