Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions, like nurses, doctors, and teachers. Some people think it is fully justified, while others believe it is unfair. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is indeed a fact that today professionals who have chosen sports as their mainstream job earn a lot more than those who work in other fields like nursing, teaching, and health care services. Some people assert that it is quite unfair for people who are not related to sports While, others think that it is reasonable. In my opinion, the latter appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind this is these sportspersons represent their state or country on the national and international level and because of this governments reward them with huge amounts of money so that more people can participate and bring medals home and thus, making state or country proud. What's more, today's highly competitive world obliges youngsters to stay indoors and study to get high paid jobs like doctors, nurses in the future so, in that case, sound money lures and motivates people to choose sports as a career. Otherwise, there would be a very less number of people in the sports field. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is the popularity among people. People take a huge interest in watching sports as it is a sort of entertainment for them and this popularity helps them to earn well. for example, Cricket is considered a religion in my country, and therefore, tournaments like the Indian premier league are organized, in which big business houses give a share of money to the players from the high profits they earn from selling tickets. Hence, the money sports professionals earn is quite justifiable. On the other hand, other professions like doctors, teachers, and nurses also earn according to the demand of their profession. Moreover, they are also rewarded from time to time when they do something extraordinary for the nation. To cap it up, I firmly believe that the money sports professionals make motivates them to do extraordinary in their chosen field of endeavor. So, there is nothing unjustifiable in this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96398891967 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71039856623 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8348217852 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285722781318 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949217641036 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074515199466 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285722781318 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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