Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions, like nurses, doctors, and teachers. Some people think it is fully justified, while others believe it is unfair. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, famous sportspersons are making more money than other individuals who are working in other important professions like medicinal practitioners, nurses, and educators. A certain number of people concur with the justified notion whereas others think it is extremely unjustified.
Apparently, a section of society vehemently deems that the famous game players deserve a huge rate of money because of various numbers of reasons. Firstly, a sportsman or sportswoman represents the country across the globe. That representation makes proud of his or her nation as well as creates a world record for the country by winning trophies for their nation. Additionally, all such efforts for winning the games require consuming and following a proper diet and spending more hours in practice for upcoming tournaments. Thus, it requires a lot of money to fulfill the needs of the living costs for a sportsperson.
On the other side, some people think it is fully wrong with another stream of people. The first prominent reason is that other important field workers such as doctors, teachers, and nurses spend more than extra time with their jobs. For instance, a nurse in a hospital takes care of their patients during off-working hours due to emergency reasons which should not be neglected by his or her boss to pay extra hour wages. Furthermore, a job of an educator is significantly important because it educates the juveniles to achieve success in their careers. Lastly, doctors take a high risk to save a life of other humans because people's life is more important than anything in the world. Therefore, they also should receive higher monthly income from their employers.
To conclude, although a professional career of a sportsperson can earn a great deal of money because of their short professional career, it is unjustified to other professionals because I personally feel that every other crucial job especially like medicinal practitioners, caretakers, and teachers jobs are too important than professional athletes. Hence, everyone successful professional discussed above should be given a satisfied amount of money according to their roles and responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to their roles and responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06822689489 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2499978383 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302296487507 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903227901703 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888784554227 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185463198461 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096907088914 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.