successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think this is unfair.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Well known sports personalities have a better income than other people in various significant professions. Although some people consider this to be totally fair, others are of an opposite opinion. I believe, that these personalities certainly deserve the wealth and the fortune.
On one hand, people think that the money, that famous sports celebrities earn is completely justified. The hard work required to become famous, truly deserves rewards. It can be in the form of medals, certificates or the money that the sports professionals receive. To illustrate, many sports stars have gone through a plethora of ups and downs over a period of years in their life, in order to be a successful individual. They at times, have been away from their families and also, have lived on a handful of pennies. For instance, Mahindra Singh Dhoni, a famous cricket player, had to go through many hardships, like spending couple of years on a railway station till he could be selected by the Indian cricket team. Hence, from the above evidences, it is absolutely clear that, sports professionals deserve their hard earned money and I agree with the same.
On the other hand, people are of an opine that, the money earned by big names in the sports field is biased. According to them, other working professionals deserve to earn more, than these sports personalities. For example, people working as scientists or doctors, who dedicate their entire life to the most vital professions, however, still do not earn well. In addition, they are neither known nor rewarded for their achievements. Known people are paid millions for advertisements of sheer two to three minutes, while experts from other fields are not even paid at the same scale for their equal hard work. Thus, it is believed that, this is an unfair practice of renumeration.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I certainly concur that the renumeration earned by the successful sports personalities for their hard work not only biased but also truly deserved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78343443248 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.849216601 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279814620348 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955072415478 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794681331016 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17581786018 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592134780988 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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