Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Professional like sportsman normally earns a lot, endorses advertisement which help them to pocket a huge amount of money. Although most of the mass believe it to be justified, others oppose this notion. I will scrutinize both the aspects in my further paragraphs before forming any opinion at the end.
To embark on, before reaching to the podium, a sports professional puts lots of effort which is hidden from people. All sport person are not successful, but only a few are. Because great players maintain a strict training plan and diet which is not at all easy for a normal human. For instance, before reaching highest popularity, Virat Kholi, the captain of Indian cricket team, has practiced since his 5th standard of schooling. He has been able to sharpen his skills because of his constant effort and never giving up attitude. Kholi gives us a reason to watch cricket in India where cricket is worship as religion. Because of his popularity, it is quite obvious that most of the companies want him to promote their product. Consequently, company has to pay him more so that rival company do get a chance to endorse him.
However, a few section believe that professional like singers, dancing are less paid specially in India even though their effort levels are or less same. This is due to the facts that most of the singers and dances hardly get chance to show their talents. Most of the people believe that their talents are god gifted even though dancers and singer have to practice for hours to master their skills.
To recapitulate, I believe that other professionals are outnumbered by great sport professionals even though efforts are same for all professionals to master their ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun are seems to be countable; consider using: 'few ares'.
Suggestion: few ares
...t person are not successful, but only a few are. Because great players maintain a stric...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reaching the highest'.
Suggestion: reaching the highest
...or a normal human. For instance, before reaching highest popularity, Virat Kholi, the captain of...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sections'.
Suggestion: few sections
... a chance to endorse him. However, a few section believe that professional like singers,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92041522491 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64690277035 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7309416078 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137804987507 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043725692232 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357314580756 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946593876509 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418444625778 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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