Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In today's era, the medical technology has been advanced with numerous features of vaccines which are significantly important to protect the younglings from diseases. Indubitably, it is valuable for children to be immunized, but there are different views on whether parents should be forced to immunize children at their own will. However, I firmly concur that parents must vaccinated their children, and this immunization should be forced by law.
Firstly, forcing children's immunization with law will protect children from poorly educated families. Sometimes, children are not vaccinated simply because their parents are unaware of the existence of vaccines. Other poorly educated parents may not even realize the drawbacks of not being immunized. By forcing the immunization, children from such families are more likely to get protected dangerous diseases such as Typhoid, Cholera and other harmful diseases. With this effect, parents will know the importance of use of vaccines.
Secondly, the law of immunization will improve many children health conditions as most of the parents are not responsible of their parenting when it comes to health and care conditions of their child. If the law is published, the parents will be aware and the health conditions of juveniles will be improved. Last but not the least, in multiple developing nations, children are suffering from discrimination via gender. For instance, in many areas of developing countries, boys are much more to be considered superior to girls which leads to dreadful effects on girl's health. By enforcing law of childhood immunization, girls in these areas will be protected and gender discrimination will be eliminated in terms of immunization.
To conclude, I would argue that parents should be forced by law to immunize their children, and this will ensure that children with careless parents, and children from developing areas will be equally protected from the common diseases. As the quote says " Prevention is better than cure" .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 563, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...os; Prevention is better than cure' .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46325878594 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92247041038 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504792332268 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6745707592 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368161548002 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136781396667 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108737823544 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255870744061 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664359082612 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.