There is no doubt that technology has given enormous amounts of entertainment such as the internet, television and social media. It is often argued that watching television consumes a lot of free time of individuals which could be indulge in other activities. However, I partially agree with this kind of notion.
Apparently, a section of society vehemently deems that television dominates a free time of many individuals because of multiple reasons. The first prominent reason is that the social life becomes silent if they get involved in watching series, movies, or any channels on the TV because they will not have time to interact with their loved ones such as family, friends and relatives. Moreover, people become less active as they do not participate in other physical activities which could be enjoy in their leisure time such as regular exercise or involving themselves in household activities like cooking, cleaning and buying groceries which are normally done by servants nowadays. This kind of lifestyle makes them lethargic and decline the rate of immune system and increase the body weight. Therefore, with all these reasons, a person should not spend more time on watching television instead of consuming time in other physical work which could be enjoyable according to their passion and hobbies in their leisure time.
On the other hand, several numbers of people have less free time to enjoy themselves due to highly competitive world. This change has been driven due to technological and digitalization world. With this effect, the stress and tension of a person has inclined more which could be reduced by watching comedy shows. In this way, they can laugh and reduce the tension of their professional life. Due to this reason, a person occupies all of his or her free time by watching TV.
By way of conclusion, although watching television is one form of source to entertain our lives, it has some drawbacks which can be easily encountered if a person should follow a proper timetable to lead a healthy lifestyle and physically fit life. As the quote says, "Live healthy, Live more".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11206896552 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73068197684 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554597701149 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8242384971 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224691029183 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073116508226 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492379555086 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128440852738 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617483096546 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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