The television is good for people.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching television.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is an issue about the influence of television on society. Some media presenters think that it is advantageous to the public, while some social workers argue that it creates many problems. This essay will consider the pros and cons of this source of information.
Let us start with the advantages of spending time on television. The first positive side is being aware of news. People, who watching TV, usually know what is happening in the country, so they can make wise decisions based on this knowledge. Another merit is having topics to discuss with close people. After watching television, people can share their opinions about what they have learned from TV, because it normally covers all events appealing to a wide range of audience. Furthermore, television gives people the opportunity to relax. People, who are subjected to much stress, can relieve it, because they can entertain themselves by different TV programs as well as movies.
Despite the positives effects of television, it has many demerits. Firstly, TV audience waste too much time. People could do more chores around the house, if they devoted less time to television. Secondly, they also receive a great deal of unnecessary information. Television is mostly full of shows, which enlightens nothing useful, but constant disagreement between family members. Moreover, TV viewers tend gain excessive weight. They suffer from obesity, since they do not move enough as soon as they have eaten a plenty of food.
In conclusion, even though television cause many advantages, it has many negative impacts on life as part of unhealthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71782305288 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681992337165 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3351520721 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7222222222 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102244619157 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304670926531 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024742591588 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522789043006 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313042302136 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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