The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Brand new costume trends and most of other commodities that are used in daily life, are observed to be evolving rapidly due to high demand in today's society. The reason behind this dramatic boom is un deniably the people's nature of mimicing others. I strongly support this view and this essay will elaborate this stand point with relevant examples and facts.
Firstly, most of the people nowadays have celebrities as their role models. This act as a catalyst for them to follow the life styles of their beloved super heroes. Thus, the costumes, jewelleries that the actors or actresses wear in a particular movie, can be seen worn by someone else in public the next day or in a garment shop's showroom for sale. For example, the movie "Titanic" which was a blockbuster in late nineties, gave an immense popularity to its main roles making them a highly demanded brand in the consumer market. So many costumes that had their pictures printed on them could be seen in every garment shop and were worn by many in public. This showcase humans' preference in following others.
Further, every person prefers to stay fit and healthy and hence if they see someone who keeps fit physically, they would follow the secrets of that person in order to become healthy and fit. For this reason, the most remarkable change that has occured recently is that "Green tea" has become a highly demanded substitute for conventional tea in the market. Most of the youth as well as adults are consuming green tea over conventional tea since they are following the stay fit secrets of a model in either an advertisement or in real life.
In conclusion, having role models and wanting to stay attractive, drive people to imitate others in the society. I believe this tendency boost up many costumes and commodities in the market with high damands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89171974522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64169238995 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3302255112 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0497831744944 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0183681713439 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01991358018 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0287733356592 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185644964693 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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