The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The significant increase in the popularity level of fashionable apparels and latest consumer products among people have greatly affected their tendency to imitate each other, in order to look superior and best. In my opinion, I agree that there are a few individuals who limit their fashion sense product usage according to the latest trends but there are others who introduce and follow their own trends or modify the existing ones according to their comfort.
Human population these days inevitably follow the clothings and consumer items that are trending, owing to the social pressure they are constantly subjected to. It is firmly believed by individuals that being up-to-date with the latest trends would earn them a high social status or raise their rank in society. Humans tend to believe that if they do not cope up with the latest trends they would be judged as incompetent, indigent, mentally challenged and hence, would be mocked, harassed or even abused for having poor or no fashion sense.resultantly, such individuals are titled to be unfit for society. Moreover, the other major factor contributing is envy. Many people opt to buy products on the basis that their friends or relatives have bought it not because they want to purchase it or need it.
Nevertheless, there are a people who in spite of bothering what others point of views are, opt to follow their own will. These people do not imitate the clothing style or buy products by getting influenced from others but instead modify the trending styles, so they do not have to cross their comfort level. For instance, if red hair and loose or lengthy outfits are in vogue they would go for red hair but with short or tight dresses. Indisputably, such people stand out in a crowd due to their unique style.
In conclusion, even though people emulate each other in terms of fashionable dresses and consumer items owing to the constant social pressure and end up all looking similar. However, there are a few people who prioritize comfort, their likes and dislikes for getting dressed and purchasing products despite imitating rest of the world and hence, stand out amongst others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99444444444 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58921671744 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4695099889 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.307692308 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185378989539 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643186927675 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444138323541 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111972245754 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275577390053 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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