The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's society, it is true that the trend of copying fashions or consumers products has becoming more popular. While it is an unacceptable to many people, i mostly agreed that there are many advantages of these tendency.
there are several negative effects of this trend. First of all, the company or person duplicating fashions and good can easier to sell them without means of advertistment or introduction. Therefore, the original owner or business of those fashions and good might be negatively affected, such as their revenue or sales. Secondly, illegal copying could be heavily fined by the government. For instance, according to NY news in 1920, The A company which was selling the same-apperance products with another competitor, was forced to close and charged 50000 US dollar. that is one of the striking instance of these trend.
On the other hand, those tendency may bring many advantages to customers .Firstly , copying then changing without completely duplicating consumers goods and fashions is the good way to improve them.
Picasso said "good artist copy, great artist steal", developing based on an old version would bring a better experience and satisphication to consumers. Moreover, this tendency would help to diversify a range of products in the market. As a result, customer would have many choices and company could also have the way to differentiate themselves to other rivals.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that illegally duplicating would bring lots of negative impacts to society, however, i agreed that those trend is the good way to bring a better value to customers.
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Message: Did you mean 'this tendency' or 'these tendencies'?
Suggestion: this tendency; these tendencies
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Suggestion: There
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'A' is left.
Suggestion: The; A
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Suggestion: dollars
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Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26254826255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91481372531 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.048581158 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2307692308 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152676943566 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532281111244 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448938981086 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844710403337 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046830128843 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.