There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Listening music in this prevailing period has become a part of everyone’s life, because people take it as rejuvenation sources in the time of competitive environment at everywhere. Ancient music plays a vital role to teach us about the culture of region.
Working late night causes depression because of deadlines by the employer to meet the goal of organization. In that case songs provide peace to their minds and body also, which raise their productivity at extreme level. Moreover, listening music is best option in the place of talking about others related to their drawbacks and weaknesses. To illustrate, in a survey new report mentioned music can be taken as alternative therapy for physiological ill patients. Therefore, music has become a necessity rather hobby.
Traditional music is a source to tell someone about their culture, because in typical music people can learn custom and even get know about particular words, which nowadays people do not use in their daily life. On another side international music sometimes beyond the limits of understanding, because of other than native language. For example, in India there are lots of songs related to the birth, wedding and even death also. Hence this is an entertainment technique to teach the youngsters about their tradition who hate to lean typical things about their culture.
Conclusively, music nowadays like blood for every human, who take advantage from it to achieve their targets. Listening traditional music also helps the parents to teach their infants about the culture of their region.
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- Some people argue that arts such as paintings and music are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
- Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past What are the reasons for it What can be done to improve this situation 59
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 61
- Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Why do think this happen? Do you think this as a positive or a negative development? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Line 9, column 425, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ed to the birth, wedding and even death also. Hence this is an entertainment techniq...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...the birth, wedding and even death also. Hence this is an entertainment technique to t...
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Line 13, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ants about the culture of their region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32270916335 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8408358083 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8586259067 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238923346023 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970664172248 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676749005433 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162095628516 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176238885239 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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