There are many different types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Numerous genres of music exist nowadays and the considerable growth of songs, musicians, singers, etc… can be comprehended as an example of why music is necessary. As much as we need music, what kind of music is more crucial is always spark controversy. is it traditional music or an international one? This essay will present the value of music as well as express that both kinds of music are equal.
music is a combination of notes, rhythm, and words and it is obviously valuable for humanity. Firstly, music is a means of entertainment. songs either help people raise their mood with joyful melody and bright lyrics or share their gloom with an alike situation for it makes you think that you are not alone. Secondly, it is a means of communication that has no boundary. people without understanding the language can enjoy the music and appraise it, for example, many people admire Trinh Cong Son's works even though they can't fully and deeply grab the meaning of the lyrics. Whether it is for the melody or the science behind it, music touches beyond the border of all countries. last but not least, the music business contributes a quite amount of money to the economy, especially in the UK and Korea.
Similar to literature, traditional music is the epitome of the antique world. it reflects the past and how our ancestors lived those days hence traditional music is a precious material for ethnology studying as well as entertaining for it prompts the feeling of nostalgia. For example, Vietnamese court music Nha Nhac was recognized by UNESCO as an intangible cultural heritage of the world because it is a repository of cultural diversity and creative expression. Unlike the deep-rooted music, international one is lasted, combined with a bunch of electrical instruments like keyboard and electric guitar. The international music contrast with the traditional one, while traditional music represents the past, international one brings out the present and future. it emphasis mostly on recent social issues and artists convey their opinions about the problems through their works. international music help connect humanity, bonding by the worried about the same problem.
In conclusion, all the kind of music is necessary owing to the fact that it supports human's feelings as well as plays the role of the bridge between nations and with the rise of the music industry, music is not only crucial for its sentimental effects but also for the economic contribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07579462103 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82988508459 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567237163814 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1951150441 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444554340433 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163649434067 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102763249609 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293018121593 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112068709838 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.