Music is diversity and becomes an important part of human’s life for various reasons. While every country has it own music which is called traditional music, there are some genres of music that is popular over the world. A great deal of heated debates on the important of both type of music hence generated and has now become even more controversial.
At the outset, there are a myriad of reasons why people love music but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that entertainment is a necessary demand of every one. An instance illustrates this action comes from the fact that hearing for music makes people relax. Another point to be taken into consideration is that music has a magical capacity to connect people. In fact, almost every music events held always attracts a vast amount of people.
However, it isn’t totally true to say that everyone have the same favorite music and it is hard to assume that what type of music among above is more important. In fact, someone loves to hear traditional music, especially the elders, whereas others interest of modern or international music played by famous musicians. The proponents of tradition music maintain that it was created by earlier generations since the first days of their country so it is required to be protected while opponents claim that this type of music is too boring and that exciting melodies such international music create a bridge to link people together. In addition, to respect other’s hobby is not incomprehensible but understandable fact and accepted widely.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, in my opinion all type of music are useful as long as it satisfies people’s need. Music and other type of entertainment need to be developed to enrich human’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9242358926 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7414352312 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460484668171 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176985677567 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936903762315 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293843616854 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091373535594 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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