There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, many kinds of music can be found around the world. It is supposed that music is the sound of our emotions and souls. Thus, music is a important part of all human cultures for a range reasons, and I would agree that traditional music outweighs the modern music.
Music is a vital part of every creatures in our planet, even animals and plants are listen to the melodies of nature. As we can be seen very clear, music impresses us, inspires us, tells us an unltold story and affects us by its melodies. For instance, it is played a happy song in wedding ceremony, while it is taken the opposite side in the funeral. Without music, those ceremonies will not to be completed. So, music can break the monotony of life, recharges our life batteries and makes our favorite atmosphere in each second of life.
However, there have been lots of debates about the important of traditional music or international one. While traditional music shows the cultures, meanings and values a society or country, modern music is pretty entertaining and quite easy to feel its rhythm. For illustration, rap songs may attract a lot of teenagers but is doesn't show the true identity of what kind of those cultures and traditions. Hence, some people preserve their own traditional music as they could tell the history and life of their ancestors as well as what we really are, although the other still choose to listen to international music.
In conclusion, international and traditional music both are felt by many people in this world. From my point of view, if one day, young generation avoid taking interest in traditional music, most of countries will lose the value of their cultures and ancestors knowledge. Thus, parents should aware children to feel and introduce traditional music to the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'listened'.
Suggestion: listened
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65959269342 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9001988858 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431927964996 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164889024294 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946637846425 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295582974293 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833688539535 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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