There are many problems caused by mobile phones. What are the advantages of mobile phones? What are the disadvantages?
Originally designed as a portable device for communication, mobile phones have since conquered most aspects of human life. In this essay, I would like to discuss a number of benefits and setbacks of mobile phones.
Admittedly, recent mobile devices connect users to the world and more. Not only a typical user can maintain a social life with friends and relatives half the world away but he or she can also access to latest world news, entertainment notices, tech updates, even online food and lifestyle services. If interested, everything can be ready in a few clicks away. Furthermore, this mobile invasion comes with booming business opportunities. Mobile phone’s popularity has created millions of jobs in the market, from programmers, business analysts, IT managers to online shop owners, streamers, and shippers. Another important benefit of a smartphone is its accessibility to endless sources of knowledge. People can read from reputed newspapers, prestigious e-archives, online libraries, and countless specialized applications for free or with a small premium. For lifelong learners, the horizon has never been brighter.
Even though mobiles have become powerful supplements to human life, they come with some dangerous side effects. First of all, many mobile applications are designed to maintain engagement with users; thanks to this, we are easily moving from one distraction to the next distraction. It is the norms for many to wake up or go to bed surfing emails or social media; not to count the number of checking times in between for hundreds of notifications and reminders while at work or gatherings. Multiple reports have been made on accidents due to texting while driving. Next, spending a lot of time on mobiles could also lead to sedentary lifestyles and anti-social issues. Lack of exercises can cause adverse health issues such as obesity and diabetes while lack of real-life connections might increase the risks of depression and social anxiety.
Overall, even though mobile phones provide endless opportunities to connect with others, build and run businesses as well as enhance our knowledge at the fingertips, they come with the risks of being distracted easily, unhealthy lifestyles and anti-social issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...orld away but he or she can also access to latest world news, entertainment notices, tech...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4245014245 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94540877117 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638176638177 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4446614138 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165598477408 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055182255603 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487811530902 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112413273601 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410734363279 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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