There is a gap in standard of living between countryside and cities. How true is this your country? What measures should be taken to reduce this gap?
At present, modernization has become trend and need of this world. The development of cities is on its peak as its never before. Whereas, countryside areas are far behind this trend which has discover the huge difference between urban areas and rural areas. Therefore, this phenomenon needs some major steps to solve which are described in further paragraphs.
To begin with, first and foremost point is the investment. Government and private investors are spending huge chunk of money to build new infrastructures and business-like shopping malls, cinemas, restaurants and so on in major cities which are already developed. On the other hand, village areas are still deprived form their basic needs such as food and shelter. Undoubtly, this trend has given birth to a gap between in living standards of both rural and urban areas. Moreover, in India, states like Delhi, Mumbai and Chandigarh are getting major investments even from foreign countries and at the same time villager are not even have electricity or water supply in their areas.
On the points of solutions, most importantly, education is one of the major things to vanish this trend. As, majority of the village areas are unable to provide proper literacy because of lacking of schools and colleges which is the reason behind their Un development and unemployment. Certainly, government must support farmers by providing them electricity and stuff at affordable price. It will produce self-employment and also help to raise their standard of living in the long run.
At end, this problem cannot be solved overnight and without some major step so government should invest money equally on both city and village areas and they should encourage more the private or foreign investors to open their projects in rural areas too to beat this unhappy trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...development of cities is on its peak as its never before. Whereas, countryside area...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'discovered'.
Suggestion: discovered
...eas are far behind this trend which has discover the huge difference between urban areas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, as to, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16949152542 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71219489512 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4808343245 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187934922022 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062552541723 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698628470439 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116231367827 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343529801955 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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