There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?
Recently, The fact the number of tertiary education students has been maximized on an unprecedented scale has brought into question whether the shortcomings stemming from this trend can overshadow its benefits. Personally, although in a few specific contexts the growth in the number of university students can negatively affect the quality of education, I believe that by and large, the advantages of this influx outweigh the disadvantages.
Admittedly, I acknowledge that, in some places and situations, the high figures of the number of people aiming to study at universities may influence the education quality. This is because of the shortage of practical materials in some universities attributed to the insufficient funds of them. One particular salient example that may hold this theory true is the third world nations such as Egypt where the quality of education in practical colleges, such as medicine, has declined owing to the limited resources for funding laboratories, relative to the maximizing number of people attending them.
However, on account of two main justifications, I uphold the conviction that the increasing number of tertiary education students is more beneficial to both individuals and societies. First and foremost, since university graduates, undoubtedly, have been learning countless skills in their faculties, they play a significant contributory factor to the development of countries' economies. This is because they acquire the suitable skill-sets for steering companies in particular directions in the light of the prevailing commercial and other operational conditions. Take graduates of Harvard Business School for example, There is no question that hiring them in the majority of world-famous corporations is a great evidence of their potential to thrive any company. As a result, the more buoyant economy of local companies, the more the flourishing in the local economies raising the living standards for all people.
To conclude, whereas the dramatic increase in the number of people having tendency to attend universities may affect the quality of education in some places in the world, I am of the belief that the advantages of this trend are much greater. This growth has efficiently assisted in flourishing the local economies across the world and making the world better place for poor people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, third, whereas, for example, in particular, such as, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51523545706 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10130566909 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5972688292 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.916666667 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238380380491 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841736160166 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642946655793 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143565363121 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483128225372 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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