In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment.
To what extent do you agree?
Crime rates have shown an increasing trend in some societies. It is often argued that irrespective of the age of the youth who commit significantly lethal crimes ought to receive the adult punishments. I totally agree with the statement above and I will discuss the reasons in the following paragraphs.
The main reason why I agree is that it will send an important message among the teenagers across the country that the state is strict and united against all significant crimes. It will increase the fear of the punishment among the teenagers as they know that they will get the same punishments as of adults. For instance, in Middle East, punishment against most crimes is similar for the teenagers and the adults, as a result, teenagers in these countries are not very much involved in crimes compared to the rest of the world as they know that they will get very harsh punishment. This shows that same is law for major crimes play a significant role to prevent teenagers from indulging themselves in the crimes.
Another reason why I agree is that it will play an indispensable role in reducing the crime rates across the country. Mostly adult criminal hires teenagers to do their task as they know that teenagers does not get strict punishment. For example, most of the murders and bank robbery in Karachi from 2013 to 2015 were committed by teenagers who were hired by robust adult gangs. These teenagers were promised significant amount of money and they were told that they will not get strict punishment. Therefore, it concludes that same law and punishment for adult and teenagers would have an enormous impact to decrease crime rates across the country.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that the teenagers should receive same punishment as of the adult for all the important crimes. As stricter would ensure public safety and security and reinstate public faith in the judiciary system of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92901234568 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61334106395 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450617283951 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7574015425 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282161767859 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106724078231 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623848835412 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180979048347 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566000160924 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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