There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed.
Discuss both sides.
There is an ongoing debate on the growing number of severe crimes happening each year. One part of the world believes that offenders should punish to death for committing a crime whereas others think that some other punishments should require. There are several heated arguments on both sides which will be discussed below.
Some of the crimes are unbelievable. In other words, If someone does severe crimes like murdering individuals and sexual harassment, these types of crimes are not acceptable in the community. Therefore, Offenders should hear the death penalty in community court. Although, there are no other measures to reduce these kinds of crimes so individuals should get a death sentence. serious crime like these has no space in society.
On the other side, many people think that serious crimes should have different penalties for committing them. Firstly, individuals should be kept in prison and should be provided with some rehabilitation methods to improve their character. Secondly, they should spend some time in jail with some spiritual guidance and after prison, they should be kept under surveillance for a certain time because they can commit crimes again. Hence, after spending a certain time in prison, individuals should indulge in community services under the watch. Consequently, society can become a better place to live if there is a balance between people.
To conclude, Serious crimes will not make this world a better place. However, people should immediately hang those who commit dangerous crimes. Also, some crimes, which are not dangerous, should have less severe punishment according to the offense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3667953668 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60560840345 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5501560522 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294747012507 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104260126332 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726563742808 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185912949201 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853998278371 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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