There should be uniform in school. To what extent do you agree?

Essay topics:

There should be uniform in school. To what extent do you agree?

The practice of compulsory uniform is widely prevalant across many countries. I completely agree for abiding to compulsory uniform in schools, as it helps in providing separate identity to children, act as social leveller and also helps in improving focus on education.

To begin with, every school has its own set-up and social identity, which is also reflected through the dress code it follows, thus providing differentiator factor to children. By just looking at dress code, public at large is able to identify kids of different schools. Moreover, uniform act as a social leveller, removing any economic in-equalities, pertaining to juveniles background, thus cementing the social bonding among them.

Additionally, uniform code throttle any avoidable competition generating from inherent desire, of children, to project as more fashionable than rest. This way they are least distracted by what other children wear, thus can better focus on their studies. Many studies in past have highlighted the drop in grade levels, ones the juveniles transit from school to college. They Have proven that this drop is partially linked to change in dress code, from compulsory uniform to fashionable dressing in college.

On contrary, freedom to dress as per own desires, does help in projecting a presentable picture in society. But this option is widely available across tertiary education level.

To conclude, school uniform is very important in building a cohesive learning environment for children, till secondary level, overcoming all other social and economical distractions and in-equalities.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60082304527 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95539729101 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4977123567 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112177144739 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395904863593 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265932531841 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599227569094 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034410911287 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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