Today, most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?
There is a growing trend in modern world, where public preference is shifting towards, marrying and giving birth, from early twenties to late twenties or even early thirties. Many people appreciate this shifting, while a section of society fears adverse consequences of this. I believe this shift will bring higher benefits to society.
To begin with, in current competitive social environment, major section of public has to undertake higher education and for skill upgradation. They are now investing higher amount of time in professional and vocational education, which cement their position in professional world and also establishing their career. Being economically stable, this section of society is able to provide a rich environment for upbringing new generation. Also, being highly educated and professionally active, they are more adept at crucial decision making in life and also inculcating same principles to their children.
Moreover, late marriage and delaying birth, increases gap in bringing new generation in this world. This in turn, reduces pressure on population growth and thus easing faster exploitation of social and natural resources. Additionally, the current generation will be able to support themselves for longer period of time, as they will be employed for longer period of time in their lives. This would have not been possible otherwise, as additional manpower would have been available at faster pace, requiring faster development and exploitation of resources.
To conclude, overall quality of life is definitely on rise with increasing gap in two generations. This development will eventually help in balancing overall human life and its dependence on resource availability and exploitation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66283524904 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01346780993 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9997464065 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154757993402 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513640126342 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324609368138 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856668332103 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240490652703 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.