In this modern era, masses are relocating in great numbers from rural to urban areas for numerous reasons, this is certainly a worrying situation for the cities as they are already overpopulated. This essay will highlight the consequences of this trend and provide a number of possible solutions to backpedal this movement.
To start with, the migration of individuals to the cities has enormously hit the rural areas in several ways. Firstly, the farming sector has been facing huge trouble due to the fact of a shortage of labor, these days it is extremely hard for the farmers to arrange people to work on their farmlands. Secondly, the economic growth of that particular region is being collapsed due to the movement of the people to resettle in towns. Lastly, not all migrants settle in the cities with their family members therefore most of the time they hang on between two places and keep thinking about their dear ones which makes them homesick.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of measures that can turn them back to live at their native place, the first and foremost solution is, legislation should create job opportunity in rural areas such as factory or tiny scale business must be inaugurated where local people can earn, and foster their families with ease. Furthermore, other basic facilities such as improved medical care, institutional facilities must be provided by the authorities owing to the fact that most of the people leave their village for this reason. They think that staying in cities can make their life, comfortable.
To conclude, a vast migration from rural to urban areas is affecting bidirectionally, cities are being overcrowded day by day whereas, the country side's major business farming is subsiding badly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as for, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05498281787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66319255045 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0894924709 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.1 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275669750132 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107867384022 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639177174312 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174707276851 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474822512193 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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