In today's era of technology, People are willing to have quality of life,which is leading them to leave their home country and move abroad for work.Western countries are more equipped with latest technology and people are enjoying good life style there.People from developing countries like India,are immigrating to western countries in order to earn money and to provide good life to their family.Some people believe immigrating to developed country will benefit the children in long run but some totally deny this fact.
Developed countries like USA,Canada,Australia are far ahead from developing nation in terms of technology,social development,Human index etc.Being a democratic developed nation ,people have right to freedom,right to speech,and there social security schemes are very beneficial for their citizens.Employees of developed countries earn more income in compare to developing nation ,which leads to having more financial stability in developed countries.People from developed countries are educated and well cultured ,which helps to develop a good society.These countries are very scarcely populated ,so there are more resources and less people .Some western countries provide free education to children of their citizen ,which is also lucrative offer for people who wants to have good future for their children.
Nevertheless, Moving to abroad for work opens lots of opportunities ,but sometimes it make life so miserable for the children.If your children is born and brought up in foreign land,it will be difficult for him/her to get back to your home country.After some time ,if you think to go back to your country ,but because of your children you could not go back to your home country.It is very difficult for your children to adapt the tradition or the language of your own country.
In conclusion, person has to analyze his/her long term and short term goal ,then only he/she should move abroad. As it is very important to consider all points as it can affect the life of their children.
- These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Due to the use of computers and mobile phones, letters writing ability is disappearing.To what extent do you agree? 56
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39432176656 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14402969577 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 269.904723931 49.4020404114 546% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.0 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.4 20.7667163134 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228530511485 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11337161808 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611076138402 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133867789999 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520153320089 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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