These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?
E-commerce is here to stay, and online shopping is now extremely popular. It brings many advantages to consumers, but there are also some drawbacks worthy of mention.
Of the numerous benefits, consumers probably rate convenience as the most important. They can make purchases at any time of the day or night without wasting time and money on transport or finding a parking place. They can shop in their pyjamas if they like, browsing websites in a fraction of the time it takes to go through the shops at the mall. Prices are usually better too because products often come directly from the manufacturer and comparing prices is much faster and more comfortable on the internet. Besides, there is an enormous selection of merchandise, colours and sizes, and the goods are delivered directly to your door. If you do not like crowds, it is the ideal way to shop; also certain purchases, which otherwise might be embarrassing, can be made in private. Overall, it is much less stressful.
As for the disadvantages, one crucial problem is the deceptive nature of some of the pictures on websites. You cannot touch or try out the goods to check for appropriate size or quality. Consequently, customers are sometimes disappointed and, to make matters worse, they have problems returning articles and getting a refund. However, the most worrying aspect of online shopping is that not all web portals used for payments are authentic or trustworthy. Finally, some people find that conventional shopping is a wonderful excuse to get out of the house and socialise with friends; and perhaps a stop for a snack and a drink in pleasant surroundings. Online shoppers definitely miss this opportunity.
In conclusion, both ways of shopping have their benefits and drawbacks. While online shopping is discreet, fast and convenient, there can be problems with quality and security, and it lacks the sociability of conventional shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, however, if, so, then, while, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12063492063 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92545151488 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8087588711 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8823529412 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29088570534 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790750458694 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816861063787 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188776484164 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563244094263 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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