These days, Mobile phones and the internet are important to the ways in which people relate with one another socially.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, due to burgeoning technological advances in the telecommunication sectors the world is now a global village so people now communicate with each other easily through mobile phones and internet. One important question is 'does this enhance people's social behaviours?. The main merits of this are convience and reduced cost of communication whereas the major demerits are increase cyber crimes and distractions. Personally, i give credence that the merits outweigh the demerits.
Irrefutably, the importance of phones and internet in social communications cannot be over-emphasized. On that note, internet and phones have made relating to one another more convenient. To illustrate, with the advent of internet and mobile phones, it is easier to send messages across one another. In the past this is done through letters , fax and soon on but this are hectic. Furthermore, this has reduced cost of communication between individuals. For instance in 90's to send a mail overseas cost 5$ but nowadays it lower than that. On the whole, the major upsides of using mobile phone and internet in interacting with each other are convenience and cost effectiveness.
Conversely, there are drawbacks to this phenomenon. Firstly, it increases cyber crimes. To illustrate, the internet era has lead to increase in social networking sites such as badoo and 2go which makes communication easier so fraudsters uses this medium to perfect their crimes. A recent report by BBC has shown how fraudsters defraud citizens of their hard-earned money through the use of mobile phones and internet. Secondly, with these, people are easily distracted. This can be seen in youngsters at school with access to internet and mobile phone gadgets. They easily loss focus and this could lead to poor grades. If the use of mobile phones are encourage in schools, it will lead to distraction and consequently poor performance among students.
To sum up, increase in communication technology has brought about the use of telephones and internet in human to human interactions. However, this have it pros and cons. I reiterate my stand the the merits outweigh the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, such as, on the whole, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137829912 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08377938427 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6480426925 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316007764582 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889279587357 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612936551972 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182128270156 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068706816394 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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