These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The advent of the internet and the latest smartphones has massively transformed the traditional methods of communication. As a result, people are socially well-connected across the globe. This essay will argue that the advantages of this change outweigh the drawbacks by first demonstrating the world-wide social connectivity with the click of a button, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage of addiction is invalid if used carefully.
The combination of the internet and electronic gadgets such as smartphones and laptops has introduced a new way for more effective and convenient interaction among people. Due to this growing trend, we are also able to bridge the long-distance communication gap, which paves the way to stronger relationships. For instance, The Times has published that there has been a significant decline in the divorce rate of the English countries during the past years because of the advent of the internet. Now long distant couples are able to better connect with each other and exchange their thoughts and ideas by using instant messaging, video and audio calls.
Despite these advantages, the compulsive use of these smart devices has often been seen among youngsters. This way, they neglect their studies and result in poor academic performance. However, this trend has been seen among those who deprived the guidance of their parents. In fact, students at Cambridge University have admitted that with the use of Whatsapp and Facebook groups, they are able to discuss complex study topics online and save their lots of travelling time and cost to set up meetings in person. Therefore, It would be completely unfair to overlook the merits of this development.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that the benefits of the internet and the smartphones in terms of personal and professional communication certainly outweigh the flawed argument that it distracts the youngsters from achieving their goals, which can certainly be dealt with the sense of responsibility and under the guidance of the elders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3009118541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97458306633 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607902735562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9235464053 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.153846154 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152586706145 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499859829509 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315922372302 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857134859954 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251994965765 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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