These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
World has become a global village as it is quite easy to move from one location to another in the matter of hours. However, many people nowadays tend to switch from their native place to another when they become mature. This phenomenon has certain advantages and disadvantages but i strongly believe that benefits outweigh the demerits. I shall discuss my stance with valid reasons and example in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, many people are born in the countryside do not have the basic necessities of life in their hometown and their lifestyle is very basic and out of luxuries. The prime reason of people moving to advance cities is to look for a better lifestyle and better career opportunities. According to a recent research, almost 70% of countryside men move to advanced cities when they become adult. The evident reason is to adapt a luxurious lifestyle and earn better money owing to more career options.
To elucidate my stance further, another major advantage of people moving to different place is to bring reforms in their hometown by exploring the world and adapting their good habits. For instance, one of my known people born in a countryside, moved to a cosmopolitan city when he grew mature and built his career. He not changed his lifestyle but also brought major reforms in his native city and change people's life. He provided them with better career options and built education institutes.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, it is a known fact that people move away from their birth place at the time of maturity but the advantages associated to this perspective cannot be overlooked as moving of an individual not only changes his live but also bring enormous benefits to the people of his area. Altogether, i support this mindset.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...born in the countryside do not have the basic necessities of life in their hometown and their lif...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to the people of his area. Altogether, i support this mindset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96308724832 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72295741699 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3178820008 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26030980154 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824235677935 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559257757351 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153931608003 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392858694186 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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