The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given picture illustrates the number of people commuting through London underground stations during a day. The travel statistics are from 6:00 am in the morning till 10:00 pm in the night.
It is evident from the line graph that people traveling in the peak morning hours are as minimal as 100 as compared to the whole day. However, the graph tends to increase by 7:00 am and goes to the peak up to 400 by 8:00 am; primarily owing to office and school hours. The trend starts diminishing around 10:00 and then stays steady between 10:00 am till 2:00. After 2 o'clock a drastic drop can be seen in the number people using underground transport reaching the lowest to 90 till 4:00 pm. After 4 o'clock the bat starts to raise again reaches the top to 380 by 6:00 pm. After evening hours, the graphs takes a nose dive and reaches 120 in number till 8:00 pm and then stays average between 8:00 pm to 10:00 pm.
Through the whole day, the two most prominent peak times where passengers use London underground transportation are 8:00 am with 400 plus number and 6:00 pm with 380 numbers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
...ay. The travel statistics are from 6:00 am in the morning till 10:00 pm in the night. It is evi...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...ady between 10:00 am till 2:00. After 2 oclock a drastic drop can be seen in the numbe...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 501, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... the lowest to 90 till 4:00 pm. After 4 oclock the bat starts to raise again reaches t...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gain reaches the top to 380 by 6:00 pm. After evening hours, the graphs takes a nose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51776649746 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32096850311 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553299492386 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6589669575 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941065770362 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511903401042 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556450740881 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953856797134 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342360738499 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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