These days, people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly popular to have more jobs and go into new career many times. However, some sociologists claim that this trend not only has a great deal of advantages but also many disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this phenomenon and offer my point of view.
Let us start by looking at the benefits of having more than one job and changing a career. One of the main positives of having more jobs is a larger income. People with more jobs tend to earn twice as much as they would if they had one job because they work more hours a week. As a result, they can afford more things such as a house, car and more holidays overseas. One of the major advantages of changing a career is trying oneself in various fields. In other words, since they go into a new career several times, they are more likely to find their dream job and get more job satisfaction.
On the other hand, this has plenty of disadvantages. First of all, having more jobs often leads to an excessive amount of stress. Take waiters for example. Waiters, who work in more restaurants, usually suffer from stress, since they hardly have spare time to relax and unwind stress. If they keep this way for a long period of time, they eventually get stressed out and become sick. Secondly, changing a career more times can result in lack of promotion. What I mean by this is that as they change a career too frequently, they tend to miss out the opportunity to get promoted and therefore get a higher salary. If they stayed in one place for longer, they would move into management and have a higher income.
All things considered, even though there are a lot of positives in having more jobs and going into a new career repeatedly, I think that above-mentioned drawbacks easily overweigh all advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i mean, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57798165138 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54812556913 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0759474968 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313439701781 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105462903658 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608960721238 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173403647796 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870996046004 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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