Throughout history, some individuals desire to build a society that is perfect while they have not come to a conclusion how the ideal society will turn out to be. However, transparency is expedient when we think of making a society that is perfect. Having trustworthy leaders, generally, will ensure that we achieve a society that is ideal.
On the one hand, the first thing that comes to mind is transparency when we think of creating a perfect society. In other words, a region will not stand if their dealings are not transparent, and it will bring a lot of confusion and mistrust. Take Nigeria, for instance, the major problem the country faces today is because the people in charge are not being sincere, and this will do more harm than good. Thus, an ideal society is achievable as long as everyone is carried along, and not been left in the dark.
On the other hand, if we have trustworthy leaders in our country, then the ideal society we want can be achieved. For example, Dubai grew to be the most visited country by tourists because they had leaders with integrity, and the results accomplished by these commanders can be seen in the country today. Similarly, the United States of America rose to be the world-power today because of the sincere leaders they have, so they run the world's economy. Therefore, having leaders that can be held accountable will endeavor that we have an ideal society.
To conclude, being transparent is very important given that we desire to create an ideal society, and having leaders we can trust will make having this society we dream about a possibility.
- Throughout the history people dream to build a perfect society while they haven t agreed how the ideal society would be like What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society How do people do to achieve an ideal society 61
- Write a letter to change the topic of your presentation at the upcoming conference 1 Why do you want to change 2 What will be your new topic 3 What equipment do you need at the time of your presentation 78
- Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant question 73
- You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick Write to another classmate and invite him her to the p 73
- Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown In your letter say When is the best time to visit Recommend someplace to stay Invite her him to your house 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...cere leaders they have, so they run the worlds economy. Therefore, having leaders that...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80866425993 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60435224721 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4576233771 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312748276986 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131043042359 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997520282268 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215002934628 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11740666396 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.