Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
Utopia is a place of perfect harmony and happiness. Mankind has been striving to meet a utopian society from ages, yet the idea of establishing ideal society has never been a talk of agreement among communities. This essay will describe the element need in today's world to develop a perfect society and the contribution of humans in achieving it.
Happiness is a most important factor in building a perfect world. Although, happiness means differently for different people. Some find happiness in wealth, while for other health is everything. For those living a poorer life, earning enough money to sustain basis daily needs is happiness, while a bed ridden old rich octogenarian wishes to have a perfect health and talking a walk in park, is happiness to him. Happiness also brings harmony among people of society, which is a dire need for today's fragmented society.
To build a pristine world joint venture of citizens and government is evident. Wealthy people can pay their taxes regularly and the money thus collected can be used by government for betterment of needy and underprivileged. Moreover, low-cost or affordable housings can be allocated to poor people. Relaxation in medical facilities for elderly can help them to cope up from illness, where there is a financial crises.
In conclusion, to create an ideal society, individuals should attain happiness and live in harmony with eachother and to attain this, there must be unity and wish to make a perfect place among folks of modern society.
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- Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work Discuss 78
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 78
- Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sports activities as they allocate to their libraries Do you agree 67
- Throughout history people have dreamed of living in a perfect society but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world How can people work towards achi 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10887096774 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80559115007 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7334584993 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215688426251 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696032524504 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524575489461 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120153138892 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044681644872 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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