Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
One way or the other we all live in a society, it's one of the integral part in the contemporary world. Even though people has not identified the elements of an ideal society, there are few things that can be done to achieve a society which is peaceful and healthier to live in. This essay will focus on the latter and will focus on how to achieve it.
A society must be a place that satisfies the trinitarian factor of living, peaceful environment, healthy living and fresh food. These are the basic needs of every human beings and societies which are able to grand the above can be classified as ideal societies. Peaceful environment make our thoughts clear and help us get clarity on what needs to be done. Subsequently, healthy living and fresh food helps people in the society stay healthy and reduce the chances of getting sick.
The above mentioned can be achieved by a proper functioning committee in the society for identifying and rectifying the problems. The authority can have meetings on regular intervals and identify the areas where people are facing issues. This will help them in identifying the issues quickly and as a group solving those problems would be much easier. On the other hand, having a committee would help in coming up with programs and ideas that are good for the society. For instance, spots tournaments and other activities, would help people stay healthy. Also, the group can help the people in cultivating vegetables as groups or in their own house that would help people stay healthy. These all factors contributes in making the society a better place to live.
To recapitulate, the ideal society is a place where people can live peace fully and healthy, achieving the latter is no easy thing and having a proper functioning committee can help in going forward towards this goal. The things we find hard on completing individual can be easily achieved by forming a group and that is the basic idea behind a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80177514793 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56081966293 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1192166057 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283556719257 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097660979478 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552080829605 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177996773607 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129619658314 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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