Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,such as Sahara desert or the Antractic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for for tourists who visit such places?
Not surprisingly, one of the most conspicuous trends on the 21st century is visiting different destinations by tourists even if those places are considered desperately challenging to visit. Therefore, an issue of the impacts of this tendency on people's lives has heated up in recent years. The objective o this essay is to outline the potential merits and demerits of this adventure for tourists.
There is a little room for doubt that the reason why a vast majority of tourists have an inclination to experience exotic and uncommon destinations is rooted in the fact that they contend this types of travelling offers a host of merits. For example, there is no wonder that after having a trip to a Sahara desert or the Antractica,inhabitants possess numerous positive characteristics, such as patience, resilience, critical thinking, and so forth.Moreover, it is highly likely that tourists learn how to tackle problems with the best and quickest solutions, particularly in the case of emergency. In other words,they are able to enhance their problem-solving. Due to the fact that having a chance to visit such difficult places, unarguably, opens up many opportunities to widen their horizons, see the world from a new perspective and also get out of their comfort zones.
On the other hand, despite the benefits mentioned above, there is no point in denying the fact that obstacles and nuisances occur during these trips. Undoubtedly, throughout the course of history, as tourists have been interested in far-fetched places for travelling, they have to cope with a large number of dilemmas. For instance, there is feasibility of being lost because of the lack of knowledge about the destination or not be accompanied by competent tour guides. Consequently, their survivals will be at stake. In addition, during these challenging travels,it is probable that some members have not any motivations for team-working and they pose a threat for others by their inaccurate and unreasonable decisions. Additionally, In some cases, the situation get worse and worse when some people endeavor to lessen team spirits by their pessimistic standpoints.
In the light of these facts mentioned above, one can reach a conclusion that when it comes to visiting daunting areas, there are not only some advantages but also some disadvantages.
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Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74561403509 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31072798652 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
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avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
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Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
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Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 295.614085422 49.4020404114 598% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 491.25 106.682146367 460% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.5 20.7667163134 412% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.5 7.06120827912 559% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199010511679 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10888483855 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458136092975 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10888483855 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458136092975 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 13.0946893788 370% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -31.72 50.2224549098 -63% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 11.3001002004 343% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.61 8.58950901804 147% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74561403509 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31072798652 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
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Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 295.614085422 49.4020404114 598% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 491.25 106.682146367 460% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.5 20.7667163134 412% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.5 7.06120827912 559% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199010511679 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10888483855 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458136092975 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10888483855 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458136092975 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 13.0946893788 370% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -31.72 50.2224549098 -63% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 11.3001002004 343% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.61 8.58950901804 147% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.