today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. what are the benefits for tourist who visit such places?
Travelling has achieved several dimensions over the years. Today, thousands of people are heading to places where conditions are inhabitable and hostile. There are both advantages and disadvantages of this trend and I will discuss both in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one of the most significant benefits of going to such places is that people gain vast experience as they are amazed by scenery and landscape that they might never have seen before. This further improves their confidence and abilities. Moreover, journeys to these places are exhausting physically as well as mentally which makes them more stronger as they take many risks over there. This allows visitors to find a new purpose in life and explore the world in a different light. In addition, they learn to overcome their fears. Thus, these tourists are benefitted in numerous ways by visiting these places.
On the other side, difficult journeys can be extremely dangerous. It could pose a threat on human life as adventurous tasks are done by them and which further affects their life. Also, they might have serious injuries while climbing mountains and doing dangerous activities. They may suffer from dehydration as their bodies cannot tolerate the extremely high temperature of Sahara desert or freezing cold of Antarctica. As conditions in these locations are severe it might lead to the death of a person in a worse scenario.
To conclude, I believe visiting these places have both merits and demerits. Difficult journeys are dangerous and thrilling, so one must consider these risks before visiting these isolated places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ly as well as mentally which makes them more stronger as they take many risks over there. Thi...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... desert or freezing cold of Antarctica. As conditions in these locations are sever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27519379845 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68593464872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7743609311 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19941667767 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532603613626 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611609713358 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107535395287 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425811166812 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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