Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Tourism has given diverse experiences from your regular life where you feel relax from busy professional life. Nowadays more people like to visit remote places like Sahara or Antarctica or some isolated vast weather conditions geography. I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such kind of vacation.
To begin with, there are many advantages of exploring such places like boost in the economy, know the culture, learn survival techniques. First of all, an individual has to prepare themselves to fit for such locations and journeys. Touring such area one can get to know their way of living, at the same time the restaurant and hotel industry will make more earnings. Additionally, residents will start getting money from renting their apartments or house. Apart from this, they will be connected to the different parts of the world along with different cuisine, fashion and society experience knowledge can get through the people who came on the trip.
On the contrary, arriving more number of folks has an adverse impact on their environment and eco-system. To fulfill living for guest one need to cut the tree. In addition to this Sahara or Antarctica, their living species will be impacted to full fill the outsider accommodation. On the other hand, a human being needs to be extra cautious in those remote areas because of some of the creatures like snakes or scorpions are very poisonous.
To conclude that going to such a distant region gives a divergent sense of reality to a person. Also one needs to be extra prepared along with he can learn to survive in such adverse conditions. Besides that this will really hit area habitat, ecosystem. I feel there should be some boundary so that it should not impact the ecology along with excitement and enjoyment in the tourism industry must not be affected.
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- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places 89
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Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, really, so, apart from, as to, i feel, in addition, kind of, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60141982608 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5594840719 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166401726011 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534758946523 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539538595693 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10287239528 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638339376803 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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