Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, tourists are becoming more and more adventurous. Growing number of people started exploring off-beat locations with challenging situations which were considered unusual places to visit a few years before. In this essay, I will discuss pros and cons for the tourists followed by my opinion.
Let's begin by looking at some of the advantages of visiting such locations. Firstly, the extreme difficulties of this locations gives feeling of adventure. In other words, people get satisfaction by exploring and surviving in the challenging natural conditions. Secondly, since such places have difficult terrains, they are less crowded and still preserved untouched natural beauty with serenity. Afterall you can be very close to nature without much interruptions by human made developments. In India, for example, people tend to have road trip to Ladakh region which has highest motorable road with most challenging terrains and extreme weather conditions.
On the other hand, one of the major drawback of visiting such places is, it can be risk to our health. Despite having fun in adventure, human body sometimes can't acclimatize to extreme weather condition and consequently it could affect human body functioning. For instance, going to the areas of high altitude can reduce the oxygen level in the body which can lead to fatal issues. Another major disadvantage is that it requires a lot of special preparations and time to go for such trip. Therefore, it can be more expensive for the tourists.
All in all, visiting difficult locations can be challenging, however, it can also be exciting and adventurous. If extreme weather conditions and finances are not the problem, visiting to places with difficult conditions can make you close to nature with satisfaction of exploration. In my view, people with great physique and fitness should visit such places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36610169492 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89904044591 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.849551063 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276063076435 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885562995265 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695453459039 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173633073338 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455109977216 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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