You work for an international company, and would like to spend six month working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
- Explain why you want to work in the company's office for six months
- say how your work could be done when you are away
- ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Abhijeet,
I am writing this letter to request you allow me for six month assignment at our company's head office in Piscataway.
As you are already aware about my new assignment in which we need to implement the cloud solution as per our business' requirement. Looking at the complexity of this project, it requires continuous communication from business for requirement gathering and continuous feedback. Moreover, the crucial implementation like this also need guidance from our IT leadership team which is sitting at the headquarters. Therefore being there for next six months for me is vital for successful delivery of this project.
Since this project contributes to 80% of my planned work for next six months, I can manage to do other piece of work from there. However, to manage other work which can't be managed from there, I can give the handover before I leave.
I would request you to approve my application and help me in arrangements of visa and travel . Also I would be highly obliged if you could also help me with the accommodation arrangements.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...m which is sitting at the headquarters. Therefore being there for next six months for me ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re. However, to manage other work which cant be managed from there, I can give the h...
^^^^
Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lp me in arrangements of visa and travel . Also I would be highly obliged if you c...
^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...me in arrangements of visa and travel . Also I would be highly obliged if you could ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9700243417 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.639251229 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269217562151 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103389521713 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075039655653 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15101722168 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685190488075 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.